Ariel - the little mermaid - Pregnant

I think that the idea for this picture is unique and well executed but there are a few things that could be done better.

The red drape is kind of distracting. If it was put there in an attempt to tie in her red hair, I don't think it really worked. It draws the eye away from the model. If the drape wasn't there and the picture was taken from an angle slightly more to the right, there would be more of that pretty white glow from the sun which would give it more of an ethereal feel.

In addition to creating more of the background glow, the different camera angle would create a more aesthetically pleasing crop on the left side. The angle this shot is at now cuts the tile funny and makes the whole thing look off center.

I love the idea of this picture.